Autumn
Night.
This is the city of ancient sorceries and Blackwood’s “Ancient Sorceries”, of churches on hills and walls of fire-blackened stone houses huddled in close alongside them. It’s the city of grand avenues and cobblestones, of streetcorner vin chaud in the winter and constant rain in the spring, of a hundred tiny bouchons tucked into even tinier streets where the galumphing American tourists dare not go lest they accidentally eat something strange.
It’s where I was that evening. A brief rain had washed everything clean, made the cobblestones shiny and black. Work in
As I first set foot upon the bridge, a man coming the other way saw me and stopped. Stared as if in recognition. I’d never seen him before, this man wearing a black suit and a brightly colored cloth around his head. I nodded, I didn’t slow down, I kept walking.
And he hissed. Leaned forward, head down like a snake, and he hissed. Three times, his head turning impossibly to follow me. I hurried on as he shouted something after me, something I did not wish to understand.
I hurried on, past the great
That night, it was up one street, down another. Zig-zag, back and forth. I walked a sawtooth edge, admiring architecture and ignoring restaurants. Thoughts of work popped up, and I squashed them quick as I could. It wasn’t their place, it wasn’t their time.
And suddenly, on a white stone wall ahead of me, a sign.
A stencil, really. On the façade of one of the lovely ancient structures that lined the street I shambled down, there was a black shape. I looked closer, and it resolved itself – a headless skeleton, formally dressed, bearing a cane.
Baron Samedi, perhaps, or someone like unto him.
He didn’t wink, not that I expected him to - him being headless, to say nothing of his being made of spraypaint. Hesitantly, I reached out and touched the figure. It was dry, and cool to the touch. The surrounding stone was warm; the black paint not.
A mystery.
I nodded my head to pay my respects to the Baron – no hat to tip, not that night – and wander off. I saw a thing I did not expect, tasted something odd and magical, and that was what the night needed. All around me, the others walked past. Not one noticed the black shape against white stone. We shared a secret, the Baron and I.
Eventually, I walked off and left the image behind me. There were other places to explore, after all. Other things to see.
A hundred feet on, there was another stencil. This one was on a pillar at the side of a massive wooden door, daring passers-by to see it. One did, one stopped dead in the middle of the street. That would be me. To everyone else, it was just graffiti, if it was anything at all.
I looked around. Up ahead, near the corner – yes, it was another one. And beyond that? I’d just have to see, wouldn’t I?
So I chased the Baron. I found him on the sides of steps, on white walls made in the days of kings whose names I’d long forgotten, on the doorposts of ancient houses and upon their gates. They were never close together, and never did the path split, the line diverge.
I was being led.
In books, in movies, we know what happens at times like this. We holler at the hapless protagonist, soon to be the hapless victim. It’s only a painting, we say. Walk away! Turn around! Don’t be stupid!
But we say that from the comfort of our wingbacks, our stadium-seated movie theaters, our cars and our coffeeshops. Put us in front of the mystery, let it whisper in our ears so that no one else can hear, and suddenly it seems reasonable to follow. Logical.
Appropriate.
So it was with me, so it was with my mystery. Where the images led, I would follow. Where they went, I would go.
That night, they led me to the river and along it to the Pont Napoleon. “Across?” I asked. Ahead of me, I saw a figure stenciled onto the ancient stone of the railing.
Across.
They were closer now, more densely packed. I thought of the Smoot markings on the bridge over the Charles in
And in the middle of the bridge, they stop. Two figures together, right up at the edge of the railing. They are barely a finger’s width apart. They are together. Someone has drawn faces for them in black indelible marker, round and hideous and misshapen. One looked angry, one looked sad.
I stood there, paralyzed, convinced somehow that the spray paint and ink was going to gather itself up and fling itself – themselves – into the water below. A tourist boat, all striped awnings and bright lights, cruises on below and I realized I’d been holding my breath. I let it out, slowly, the sound hidden by the drinking and shouting and engines from the ship below.
Drawings. They were, of course, just drawings. I’d had my taste of mystery and would treasure it, would wrap it up and guard it so that I could take it out when needed. So that I’d have a well of mystery and wonder and helpless fascination to reach into when something I was writing called for it.
Maybe it was all the hissing man’s doing. I could take that speculation, too, the fear that it inspired and the wonder at the cause, and save them away as needed. I could wrap up the skepticism – Lord knew there’d be a need for that – and the fear, and the moments when I’d told myself aloud that I was just being silly. There would be a place for all of them. All the wonder and mystery of the night, all the strangeness and magic, would live on. It would be inspiration, imagination, memory – a story, or perhaps more. Bits and pieces of that night would inform so much, or at least I’d hoped they would. Otherwise, they’d come home to roost in my nightmares.
I finished crossing the river, suddenly glad that the trail had ended. I’d find someplace to eat, someplace with bright lights and lots of people and despairing waiters who liked tourist dollars but not the tourists who came with them, and that would be enough. Dinner, and then home, and to bed.
After all, I had seen enough for one night.
I never saw the hissing man again. And in the morning, all the skeletons were gone.

9 Comments, Comment or Ping
rjones
Richard,
Your essay seems a natural introduction to any of a host of eerie adventures. I’m already looking forward to reading the following chapters.
R C Jones
Jul 27th, 2007
David Niall Wilson
There was a Thomas Ligotti fell to this…stories within stories…I can see this as the beginning, middle or near the end of several different stories all at once, and it’s times like this that you gather the images that last.
I spent a lot of nights like that over in Spain. One night, very late, we were out (wasted) on a beach in Rota named “Playa de La Luz”
We met a scraggly old dog on the beach, and he fell into step, escorting us. He stayed with us until we left his beach, and watched us go…
From then on we called him La Luz, and we knew it was his beach, and how it was named…and in those moments it didn’t seem strange or unlikely at all.
I love essays like this one.
DNW
Jul 27th, 2007
Frank Wydra
How well I know that night. Usually, it’s the Jack-on-the-rocks. But every once in a while it’s the sober beginning, or middle, or end of something that won’t go away. Sometimes it gets written, sometimes not.
Richard, there are so many things I love about this piece. First, it’s a story. Stories rule! Second, the atmosphere. It envelopes. Third, the ambiguity. As the saying goes, “if you don’t know where you’re going, any road will take you there.” Here the road is stencil marked, but still an enigma.
Good piece. Keep them coming.
Frank
Jul 27th, 2007
Brian Hodge
I have no idea where the strictly factual recounting ends and any possible fanciful tweaking may begin. And I don’t want to. I just know I’d happily keep following you … wherever.
Jul 27th, 2007
Janet Berliner
I echo what Brian said. This is wonderful,
Richard. More. Please. –Fred
Jul 27th, 2007
David Niall Wilson
Janet really did echo (:
Jul 27th, 2007
mikepaulle
Clever and evocative. The boy can write. He’s describing the Lyon I know, but far better, scarier and funnier than I could.
Jul 27th, 2007
Richard Dansky
Mike - Thank you. The office complex I was working at while I was there had a series of pots of concrete cacti along the walls of its dingy little courtyard. The shadows of Old Lyon were positively refreshing by comparison.
Janet - At this point, I’m not sure I’m allowed to stop…
Brian - If you ever want the answer, let me know. I think you already have a pretty good idea, though…
Frank - Thank you, and I’m glad you enjoyed it. Lyon in particular always demanded that I wander and retell, more than even Paris. Perhaps it’s the Blackwood influence.
David - Many thanks, and what do you think are the odds that La Luz is still there, and will be there whenever you go back. It seems appropriate somehow.
And first and last, Mr. Jones - thank you kindly, and hopefully the rest of the story will live up to expectations.
Jul 27th, 2007
David Niall Wilson
I’ve thought about that Rich, and you know…I wouldn’t be surprised at all to find him still there…or to find another dog, perhaps younger, or completely different, acting in his stead….
D
Jul 28th, 2007
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